Thursday, February 7, 2008

तेरी बाते

तू अब पहले के जैसी सताती नहीं है,
तेरी बाते अब याद आती नहीं है|

वो नन्ही सी आखे, वो नाज़ुक सी बाते,
वो बेमानी शर्तो में उलझी सी राते,
वो बारिश की बुदो की प्यारी सी उलझन,
वो सड़को के गड्दो की अनचाही अड़चन,
अब वो बारिश की बुदे बिंगाती नहीं है,
तेरी बाते अब याद आती नहीं है|

वो परेशां होठो से कुछ बदबदाना,
वो खाम्ख्वा बिना बात के खिलखिलाना,
वो हर बात पर बेमतलब से परदे,
वो हर बात को न जाने क्यों मुझसे छुपाना,
तू अब भी मुझे कुछ बताती नहीं है,
पर तेरी बाते अब याद आती नहीं है|

वो अनचाही बातो के तेरे पुलिंदे,
वो फिर उनको सुलझा कर मुझको समझाना,
उलझा न जाने कब वो बातो का बाना,
तुम सच कहती थी की बातो को बोझ न बनाना,
तेरी उलझी बाते मुझसे अब भी सुलझ पाती नहीं है,
पर अब वो तेरी बाते याद आती नहीं है|

10 comments:

Amey Samant said...

wah ustad wah.
copyrights to nahi liya hai na ;) ?

Anonymous said...

hmmmmmmm...
ye poem kahin suni huyee lag rahi hai.... not able to recall right now hehehehehehe

overall good poem 3 out of 5 rating from my side.

in a very serious note nice attempt to show your sentiments.

keep it up

Abhi said...

I liked the poem. Nicely done. Deeply felt :)
a query
"अब वो बारिश की बुदे बिंगाती नहीं है,"
wt do u mean by that ,coz its pretty cool.

viju said...

Thx amey and rahul & abhi for dropping in.. to answer ur question abhi, the line means that the rain drops could not able to make the actor wet as it use to…may be because now he doesn’t like go out in rain now, may be because now he cant feel the same gentle touch in rain drops as before, may be because he is already so much wet in tears so doesnt matter or may be simply because its not at all rainy now :D

Aniruddha Sharma said...

kya baat hai Vijju,

very gud attempt...if you have recently started with poems I would say...it's gr8 caz isme wo nausikhiyapan nahi dikhta jo aam taur pe naye naye kavita likhne ka shauk chadhe logo kiwritings me hota hai. and above all tumhari kavita feel hoti hai aur ek kavita ki ekmaatra safalta yahi hai...

keep it up dost..im happy to see this side of ur's :)

bas bhasha pe thoda sa dhayan do tumne "bingati" likha hai jabki wo "bhigoti" hai

Rims said...
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Sajjan said...

Great.....
Perfect in ur first attempt...
The poem passes most of the characteristics of a good poem.
Highly rhythmic, deep meaning, beautifull words, so passionate and most import you are able to express what you wanted to...
Keep going..

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harmonika said...
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harmonika said...

Gud One.. I hope you have written this poem... If yes then really gud one.. as not expected from an IT Geek.. :-)